diff --git a/markdown/Building-a-better-digital-reading-experience.md b/markdown/Building-a-better-digital-reading-experience.md
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@@ -121,9 +121,10 @@ high-quality content available online (locking people into apps and
 subscriptions in order to view the content) is detrimental for the distribution
 of knowledge in what's supposed to be the age of information. If I want to be
 exposed to diverse opinions on what's going on in different industries or
-different parts of the world, I'd probably need at least a dozen subscriptions,
-while in earlier generations folks could just walk into their local library or
-buy a single book or a single issue of a newspaper every now and then.
+different parts of the world, I'd probably need at least a dozen subscriptions
+and a similar number of apps on my phone, all pushing notifications, while in
+earlier generations folks could just walk into their local library or buy a
+single book or a single issue of a newspaper every now and then.
 
 I don't think that we should settle for a world where the best reports, the
 best journalism and the most insightful blog articles are locked behind